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Loveless by ~Aislin-Sedai:iconAislin-Sedai:

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My name is Breathless
I can’t breathe when you are near
My name is Memoryless
I have no memories, only fear
My name is Bondless
There can’t be a bond between you and me
My name is Friendless
I don’t have any friends as you can see
My name is Sleepless
I just stay awake and think of you
My name is Painless
There’s only emptiness and nothing you can do
My name is Tearless
There are no tears left to cry
My name is Trustless
Can’t trust anyone just want to die
My name is Skinless
There’s no outside to show me
My name is Nameless
There’s just nothing I can be
My name is Warless
I don’t want to fight
My name is Endless
I want to be forever by your side

But I will destroy everything we’ve built together
My name is Loveless,
I can never have true love forever.
©2006-2009 ~Aislin-Sedai
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This poem is based on the anime Loveless. Well, it hasn't much to do with it, but the names in this poem are the names of the episodes of Loveless.

This poem is not about me, not really. Only the end is... Not that I'm 'loveless' now, but I am afraid I will destroy everything between me and boyfriend, someday.
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~mutetomymuse:iconmutetomymuse: May 24, 2006, 1:14:16 PM
Good job

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~mutetomymuse:iconmutetomymuse: May 24, 2006, 1:14:20 PM
Good job

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-=Mutetomymuse=-
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~Aislin-Sedai:iconAislin-Sedai: May 24, 2006, 11:04:55 PM
Thanks :)

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Caught between what happened and what could never be
~MajesticRhapsody:iconMajesticRhapsody: May 25, 2006, 1:02:34 AM
You know my comment: it doesn't have to be... :hug:x1000000

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MY NAME IS SKYGGESANG, REMEMBER IT!
~krijt:iconkrijt: May 25, 2006, 1:47:05 AM
Honestly, this is a great poem. Very well done!

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~Zv2mskl:iconZv2mskl: May 25, 2006, 4:11:27 AM
That's a beautiful poem.

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All the sorrow and the pain
will be washed away by rain
- Stratovarius, Season of Change
~Schilpaardje:iconSchilpaardje: May 25, 2006, 7:36:05 AM
Wieee +fav pour this beautiful poem, I like the structure and i understand you are afraid of that, but you have Lex to let that not happen ^^
*pepineros:iconpepineros: May 25, 2006, 10:32:14 AM
especially that last line.... *rillingen over rug* echt vet mooi... maybe (most likely) you will not have true love for ever, but... like, who cares?? you have it now, so cherish it, and even if it does come to an end.., that end is not now so worry about it when it comes. I think you'll only make it come earlier when you worry about it, actually... although it's completely logical to be worrying about it.
well... all the best for you, with everything :) :hug:

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~MajesticRhapsody:iconMajesticRhapsody: May 25, 2006, 11:09:57 AM
Thanks a lot, this really helps me feel better too...

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--At the court of King Chaos only blood can write its own tragedy

MY NAME IS SKYGGESANG, REMEMBER IT!
*pepineros:iconpepineros: May 26, 2006, 6:02:24 AM
you're very welcome :hug: but why the "too"? you're the first one to react on this.. ;)

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"Music is an art form whose medium is sound organized in time. The word derives from the Greek μουσική (mousike), '(art) of the Muses'." - Wikipedia
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